Hi Chris
Just had a chance to read the document. He uses a lot of words to explain what is actually quite basic.
To correct for wind drift, you need to keep the nose pointed sightly into wind at all times.
It is correct that there are 2 ways to do this, roll through each loop or part loop and use the rudder to yaw the nose into wind, the reality is that you need to do both of these things. In crosswinds you will always need to roll as you pull or push, then use rudder to make adjustments before, during and after the roll.
If you make yourself a stick plane it is much easier to visualise what I'm now going to attempt to explain. You are flying straight and level in a cross wind ready to enter a loop, you should already be yawed into wind to correct for drift. Because of this, when you pull or push the elevator, after the first 90 deg of pitch the wings will appear to have rolled. Imagine you are flying left to right, crosswind blowing in, so the nose will need to be yawed to the left (away) to correct the drift. If you now pull to a vertical in front of yourself, once vertical you will be looking at the top of the model, not looking straight down the wing as you should be, this is because you started with the nose slightly angled away from you. To correct this you need to roll very slightly left as you pull, roll the correct amount and your wings will be appear correct and you will maintain the nose angle away from you. Really hope that makes sense!
Use the rudder as well to make minor adjustments and everthing will be perfect
The difficult part is now learning to be natural on the rudder which is THE most difficult control to master. You know that aileron is effectively reversed when you fly towards yourself and elevator is reversed when inverted, with rudder, there are multiple attitudes that you will find yourself in when you need to apply rudder and it can take years before you have the confidence to know you will apply it in the correct direction, but learn that skill your flying will improve dramatically. In the article he says that the top pilots make it look so easy, this is because they are constantly applying these little corrections before those watching have even realised they are required.
The other thing not mentioned is that wind correction is normally required for a partial cross wind/headwind so the adjustments need to be done to compensate for sideways and forwards and backwards drift, so in your pull to vertical described above, you need to keep the sidways yaw element and stop the pitch before true vertical so the nose ends up leaning slightly forward to counteract the downwind drift element as well.